To pre-order a signed hardback of Channeler's Choice click here.

Friday, January 20, 2012

Friday Creature Feature~Behir

Nothing lies below the long expanse of Cliffside that stretches before me, yet I cannot help but look again. Bright sunlight bathes the green valley below, beckoning to me. It would feel so good to warm my scales in its yellow brilliance. Something moves beneath my tail. Whipping my thirty eight foot long, serpentine body around, I dive back into the cave. All four of my eggs lay as still as green jewels. Maybe I imagined it. To be sure, I wrap my body around them, touching each gingerly with one of my dozen legs.

After a long moment, the largest of the eggs wobbles in my claws. I lower my head next to it, running one of my horns over it. A pecking noise followed by vibrations travels through the highly sensitive nerves along my horn. Two more of the eggs start to quiver. I draw back to watch.

A long crack stretches down the side of the first egg and a small nose pokes through. After a few more good shakes the entire egg splits in two and my first born emerges, his red tongue flicking out to taste the air for the first time. Behind me rocks tumbled as something scuttles into the cave mouth. Baring my fangs, I turn back prepared to fight, but it’s only my mate. He sidles up beside me and together we watch as our young come into the world.

This work of fiction is original and my own (drawing included). Please do not copy or reproduce it in any way without permission and linking back to me with credit. I'm no artist (clearly, lol!) but I had to give it a shot. 

25 comments:

  1. Aww! What a cute story! And you're a much better artist than I am. I think that drawing is pretty good. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. LOL! Thanks Cherie. I had to give it a shot to give readers a visual. :)

      Delete
  2. Ah, mother love, there's nothing like it. And it doesn't matter if it's sweet and soft or scaly with twelve legs, it rules!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Indeed there isn't! LOL, scaly or not.

      Delete
    2. Love the creature feature! I am so glad you brought it back. This is perfect. And I love your drawing! You're so talented.

      Delete
    3. You're so sweet Karlene, thanks!

      Delete
  3. Never come between a mother and her new born! Glad it was just her mate. Exotic sea serpent. Excellent description, Roland

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. True, never a good idea! I'm glad you enjoyed it Roland. Thanks for stopping by.

      Delete
  4. Wow, I really felt like I knew this one. Nicely done.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks hon, glad you connected with it.

      Delete
  5. I love the drawing. :)

    Wonderful story!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you! I'm out of practice a bit with drawing, and was never outstanding at it, so that's very sweet of you. :)

      Delete
  6. Awwww, I love it! Sweet dragons. :D

    ReplyDelete
  7. A beautiful story of life and love. The drawing is nice too.

    .......dhole

    ReplyDelete
  8. I so love to read your amazing descriptive stories!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Aw, thank you. I'm totally blushing. :)

      Delete
  9. Dangerous creatures parenting. Adorable and also kinda fierce at the same time!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I love that description, thanks Lydia!

      Delete
  10. What a wonderful motherly point of view from such a fierce creature. You see if the most feared creatures have a soft spot for their young.

    Enjoyable as always, Heather.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Michael. Great new avatar pic by the way!

      Delete
  11. I love that Daddy got back in time for the births :-)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I couldn't let him miss it. :) I'm a softy.

      Delete
  12. What good father would not miss the birth of his kids? Even if they were hatched.

    ReplyDelete

Comments are like good friends, the more the merrier!